when i was 10 years old（麻烦谁来帮我修改下这篇短文 谢谢了 英语高人速来啊）

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• 麻烦谁来帮我修改下这篇短文 谢谢了 英语高人速来啊
• 完型填空when i was 10 years old ,my mother passed
• 在我10多岁时，用英语如何表达
• I____swim when I was 10 years old. A.can B.am able to C.could D.of
• I got my first bike when I was 10 years old as a birthday present . 什么意思帮下忙
• When I was ten years old,my family_（move）to the city.
• Everyone has their own way of learning a foreign language. When I was ten years old, I _______（

麻烦谁来帮我修改下这篇短文 谢谢了 英语高人速来啊

不劳无获（这篇文章，可能要换种译法，未尝苦果，则无收获）我10岁时，遇到了一件可怕的事情，因为那一刻我就在生死之间。我出生在沿海城市，这个城市的人们非常喜欢在海里游泳，而我通常晚饭后就到海滩上去，这已经成了我的习惯。事情当天，天气恶劣，海上刮着大风。而我对自己的游泳技术过于自信，当时我太兴奋了，走得离海岸越来越远。也许那段距离对于大人不算什么，但是对于我而言，我敢说，水可以没过我整个人，天气更糟了，这时我才意识到危险，但是太迟了，一个大浪突然向我袭来，我呛了一口水，海水把我吞噬了，我尽力想保持清醒，竭尽全力自救，但又有一个个大浪打来，然后我完全沉入了水中。我觉得自己的意识越来越模糊，甚至对疼痛都失去了感觉，我什么也不知道了，除了意识到后来我被送回到海滩上，爸爸救了我，那时我嚎啕大哭，我也不知道为什么我会哭，也许因为害怕，也许因为高兴，也许因为我被感动了。后来我知道了，爸爸总是跟着我来到海边，只是它从来不让我知道。爸爸给了我生命，在我面临死亡时，他又救了我，在此我不想刻意感谢爸爸，因为在父母面前，每天都是感恩节。中国有句俗语，“溺死的都是会游泳的”。所以从那次事故以后，如果我去游泳，我就会非常小心，也许是因为吃一堑长一智。 When I was 10 years old, I encountered a terrible thing that I will never forget, because at that moment I was between life and death.I was born in a coastal city, where the people are very fond of swimming in the sea and I always went to the beach after dinner, this became my habit. My story took place in a bad weather day, then sea wind was so heavy. I was too confident about my swimming skill, I went to the beach for swimming alone. So excited I was, I was farther and farther away from the shore. Maybe it was nothing for an adult, but I dare say the water was deeper than my height. The weather was getting worse, then I was aware of the danger and decided to return to shore, but it was too late, a big wave came towards me suddenly, water chocked me and swallowed me, I tried to keep awake and spared no effort for saving myself, but another big wave follow came, I was submerged, I was loosing my consciousness. I even could not feel the pain. But a big hand caught me and pulled me to move, I knew nothing except that I was returned to the beach later. My father saved me and I cried at that moment, I didn’t know why I was crying. Maybe its for fear or cheer, maybe I was really moved.Later I knew that my father always followed me without my awareness. My father gave me my life and my father saved me in the face of death. I do not want to say thanks to my father here because everyday should be a Thanksgiving Day when I is around my parents.As a saying goes in China, "the one who drowns is the one who is good at swimming". Thus after that incident, I have always been very careful when I go to swim, may be this is by falling we learn to go safely.

完型填空when i was 10 years old ,my mother passed

When I was 10 years old，my mother passed away because of illness．I had to move to the usa to live with my father．There I met my 21 for the first time and from the beginning she made sure that I was safe and welcome．Over the past several years she 22 everything I needed．I am happy today because I have a 23 stepmother． Yesterday I went to see her for Mother’s Day．When 24 my gift，she held my face in both of her hands and 25 me—even though I had the flu! Her simple act of affection 26 me back to my very first night in America．After I was 27 from the airport，we went home and she unpacked my 28 ．Then she took me shopping for new clothes 29 the ones I had brought with me from Africa were a bit worn． That night before I went to bed，she came to my room．She told me she was 30 to have me and that she would take good care of me．Because I was 31 shown affection as a child，I did not Know how to 32 what she said so I just stared at her． Before she walked out of my new room，she asked me for a 33 ．But I had no idea what she was talking about because I had never heard the 34 before． 35 she didn’t give up．She told my father that she 36 me to give her a hug and asked him to explain to me what she 37 ．My father explained 38 a hug was and told me why people hugged in America．Then my new mom opened her arms 39 and shyly I opened mine and we hugged． That was my very first hug and I was eleven at that time．I’m 23 now and， 40 ，I have received many hugs since then．21．A．stepmother B．cousin C．brother D．sister 22．A．preserved B．provided C．managed D．designed 23．A．beautiful B．strict C．kind D．serious 24．A．ordered B．supplied C．bought D．presented 25．A．kissed B．praised C．welcomed D．comforted 26．A．kept B．took C．held D．gave 27．A．brought up B．helped out C．seen off D．picked up 28．A．schoolbag B．purse C．1uggage D．scarf 29．A．since B．though C．when D．if 30．A．eager B．thankful C．glad D．confident 31．A．frequently B．always C．once D．never 32．A．react to B．see to C．apply to D．refer to 33．A．chat B．hug C．favour D．help 34．A．question B．word C．story D．suggestion 35．A．Since B．So C．But D．And 36．A．determined B．1onged C．invited D．wanted 37．A．meant B．required C．demanded D．ordered 38．A．what B．how C．where D．which 3 39．A．direct B．wide C．suddenly D．quickly 40．A．surprisingly B．interestingly C．hopefully D．thankfully 21-25 ABCDA 26-30 BDCAC 31-35 DABBC 36-40 DAABD

在我10多岁时，用英语如何表达

• when I was a teenager.

• At my teens,

• when I was ten years oldat my twenty years old，... 都可以

I____swim when I was 10 years old. A.can B.am able to C.could D.of

该题选C，句子时态为过去式，而四个选项中仅有Could可以表示过去式，故排除A、B、D选项。句子意为我十岁的时候就会游泳了。

重点词汇解释：

1、swim

vi. 游泳；漂浮；浸；眩晕

vt. 游过；使浮起

n. 游泳；漂浮；眩晕

adj. 游泳时穿戴的

双语例句：

She learned to swim when she was really tiny.

她很小就学会了游泳。

2、could

aux. 能够， 可以；可能；差点就，本来有可能；很想

v. 能（can 的过去式）

双语例句：

He could have made a fortune as a lawyer.

他本可能当律师挣大钱。

swim的用法：

swim的基本意思是游泳，游过，指靠摆动身体在水中前进或漂浮。swim还可作漂浮，飘忽，滑行的意思，引申可表示旋转，摇晃，眩晕。

swim的过去式是swam，过去分词是swum。swim用作名词时意思是游泳，其前常加不定冠词a。

the swim意思是潮流。in the swim作熟悉内情，通晓时事，积极参与社会活动，通晓现时风尚潮流的意思。out of the swim的意思是赶不上潮流。

I got my first bike when I was 10 years old as a birthday present . 什么意思帮下忙

• 我在10岁的时候得到了作为我的生日礼物的我的第一台单车~(重新组织过语序的翻译)

• 这句话我不敢说错，但是正常人不这么说，应该是：I got my first bike as a birthday present when i was 10 years old.其中as a birthday present 修饰bike 而when i was 10 years old 是定语从句补充全句。也可以如下：I got my first bike when I was 10 years old，as a birthday present . 译文：我的第一辆自行车是我10岁时得到的生日礼物。

When I was ten years old,my family_（move）to the city.

When I was ten years old,my family(moved)to the city.在我十岁的时候，我家搬到了城市居住。

Everyone has their own way of learning a foreign language. When I was ten years old, I _______（

小题1:began小题2:Gradually小题3:following小题4:guide小题5:by小题6:so小题7:what小题8:photos/pictures小题9:challenge小题10:perfect试题分析：文章介绍作者通过和外国人交谈练习英语，并讲述了一次给外国人做导游的经历，这对他提高英语有很大帮助。小题1:当我十岁的时候，就开始和外国人交谈。考查时态，因为是十岁的事情，用一般过去式：began小题2:一开始，我很害羞，但是逐渐的在他们的帮助下，我越来越自信了。考查副词：逐渐地：Gradually小题3:接下来的一年，我和两个外国人到了扬州。Following是现在分词做定语：“接下来的”，小题4:我成了他们的导游。考查名词“导游”：guide小题5:他们想乘船四处看看。byboat乘船。小题6:卖家不懂英语，所以我尽量把他们说的话翻译成英语。表示因果关系，用so小题7:what引导的是宾语从句，在宾语从句中what做宾语小题8:然后我们去了小动物园，在那里他们拍了很多照片。名词“照片”，注意用复数：photos/pictures小题9:这是一次难忘的挑战。考查名词“挑战”challenge小题10:practicemakesperfect“熟能生巧”